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Terrible Facebook-coverThis science fiction novella tells how Corr Syl fights to rescue his dear friend Rhya Bright.

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The Tsaeb (silent T, long a) warrior Corr Syl has discovered he hates killing and is brooding about his future when he learns that someone has kidnapped his friend and secret love, Rhya Bright. Ya Zhōu, seeking to remove threats to his power, uses Rhya as bait, unaware of the superior abilities of Tsaeb warriors. But when Corr captures his would-be assassins and Rhya overcomes a room full of guards and almost escapes, Zhōu realizes his mistake and flees with Rhya, leaving false trails and traps in his wake. Corr pursues in a mysterious old warship he borrows from a museum. Dodging bombs, missiles, and jet fighters, Corr follows Rhya and Zhōu to a fortress inside a dead volcano where the final trap awaits.

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Corr Syl the Warrior, Prize-Winning Science Fiction Kindle eBook on sale for $0.99.Buy from Amazon Orange

Corr Syl the Warrior is the first book in the #EcoSciFi series about the Tsaeb, smart descendents of Earth’s many animal species.  The Tsaeb love humor, but they also live by lofty ideals, and stand ever ready to defend the Earth from enemies of equity and harmony.

FaceBook Cover Warrior“A beautifully written YA novel that will captivate environmentalists and sci-fi fans of all ages.”—Kirkus Reviews (starred review)

This book is about the battle rabbit Corr Syl. As it begins, Corr’s plans for a nice long vacation are interrupted by the appearance of a beautiful young warrior trainee, Rhya Bright. As Corr sticks around striving for Rhya’s attention, the District Council calls on him for one task after another. Corr grudgingly does as the Council asks while he works on Rhya and focuses on his personal goal to become a comedian. In a society filled with comedians, Corr Syl can’t get a laugh. You’ll see why. Eventually, he discovers that his one-liners tear Humans up, and Rhya quietly wonders if he will put down his weapons and become a comic in Human nightclubs. Conflicts between Humans and Tsaeb build throughout the story, but Corr only loses sight of his personal goal when he is faced with a District Council request to execute a dangerous murderer. The murderer happens to be his first childhood friend.

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The New Cover for Corr Syl the Warrior My Science Fiction Novel

Corr Syl the Warrior New Book Cover

Corr Syl the Warrior_FrontCoverIt seemed best to use common images for the Tsaeb series covers.  Here’s the new front cover for Warrior.  After you read Terrible suggest ideas for the next cover.  (Design by Rick Holland.)

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“Corr Syl the Terrible” My New Science Fiction Novella Is On Sale Today

My New #ScienceFiction Novella, Corr Syl the Terrible Is Now On Sale

This STerrible Facebook-coverciFi novella for teen readers follows Corr Syl’s struggle to rescue Rhya Bright who has been kidnapped by Ya Zhōu, a brilliant Human and ruthless dictator.  Corr Syl the Terrible is on sale at Amazon.com for $2.99.  Buy it now.

Corr has discovered he hates killing and is brooding about his future as a farmer or librarian when he learns that someone has kidnapped his true love, Rhya Bright. Ya Zhōu, seeking to remove threats to his power, uses Rhya as bait to draw Corr into a trap. But when Corr captures his would-be assassins and Rhya overcomes a room full of guards and almost escapes, Zhōu realizes he is the one in danger and flees with Rhya, leaving false trails and traps in his wake. Dodging bombs, missiles, and jet fighters, Corr follows Rhya and Zhōu to a fortress inside a dead volcano where the final trap awaits.

Zhōu has Rhya taken away in a helicopter. Desperate to follow, Corr borrows an ancient warcraft from a museum. Z99, as the ship introduces itself, is sentient and constructed with technology based on the physics of dark matter and quantum relationships. The ship proves an invaluable asset as Corr’s journey takes him to Xi’ou, the capital of the Taoso nation. Though ostensibly ruled by the Emperor, the nation’s true power lies in the hands of Ya Zhōu, the Human Minister who commands a network of assassins and spies.

Though he began his mission alone, Corr meets unexpected allies like the young Cai family, who want to see Ya Zhōu deposed for the return of true peace and freedom. When Corr tracks Rhya to Zhōu’s secret headquarters hidden inside a volcano, he realizes at last that he cannot save Rhya. He calls for help from his former battle group, including his best friend, the wise and beautiful Allysen Olykden. Together, the warriors descend into the heart of the volcano, determined to save Rhya. Corr Syl the Terrible is the riveting tale of a young warrior’s journey to become something more than the swords on his back.

Author’s Note:  Corr Syl the Terrible completes the introduction to the Tsaeb civilization that began with the science fiction novel Corr Syl the Warrior. The story adds details to the nature of Tsaeb warriors, and it shows how changing your mind can transform weakness into strength. In this story, the change alters the future of the Earth itself.

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Corr Syl the Terrible (print: $12.95, eBook: $2.99).  Both formats are available online from Amazon.  The print edition is also available from Barnes & Noble, CreateSpace, and neighborhood bookstores.

Now on Sale: “Corr Syl the Terrible” A #ScienceFiction Novella

Corr Syl the Terrible, My #SciFi Novella Is Available Now

Terrible Facebook-coverThis science fiction story for teens and adults follows Corr Syl’s struggle to rescue Rhya Bright who has been kidnapped by Ya Zhōu, a brilliant Human and ruthless dictator.  Corr Syl the Terrible is on sale at Amazon.com for $2.99.  Buy it on Amazon from any country.

Corr has discovered he hates killing and is brooding about his future as a farmer or librarian when he learns that someone has kidnapped his true love, Rhya Bright. Ya Zhōu, seeking to remove threats to his power, uses Rhya as bait to draw Corr into a trap. But when Corr captures his would-be assassins and Rhya overcomes a room full of guards and almost escapes, Zhōu realizes he is the one in danger and flees with Rhya, leaving false trails and traps in his wake. Dodging bombs, missiles, and jet fighters, Corr follows Rhya and Zhōu to a fortress inside a dead volcano where the final trap awaits.

This science-fiction novella takes place on an Earth where all animals are intelligent. Since they are older than the Human species, most animal species have evolved far beyond Human abilities. They have learned to heal their bodies, adapt their shape, and live in harmony with nature. They call themselves Tsaeb (silent T, long a).

Zhōu has Rhya taken away in a helicopter. Desperate to follow, Corr borrows an ancient warcraft from a museum. Z99, as the ship introduces itself, is sentient and constructed with technology based on the physics of dark matter and quantum relationships. The ship proves an invaluable asset as Corr’s journey takes him to Xi’ou, the capital of the Taoso nation. Though ostensibly ruled by the Emperor, the nation’s true power lies in the hands of Ya Zhōu, the Human Minister who commands a network of assassins and spies.

Though he began his mission alone, Corr meets unexpected allies like the young Cai family, who want to see Ya Zhōu deposed for the return of true peace and freedom. When Corr tracks Rhya to Zhōu’s secret headquarters hidden inside a volcano, he realizes at last that he cannot save Rhya. He calls for help from his former battle group, including his best friend, the wise and beautiful Allysen Olykden. Together, the warriors descend into the heart of the volcano, determined to save Rhya. Corr Syl the Terrible is the riveting tale of a young warrior’s journey to become something more than the swords on his back.

Author’s Note:  Corr Syl the Terrible completes the introduction to the Tsaeb civilization that began with the #ScienceFiction novel Corr Syl the Warrior. The story adds details to the nature of Tsaeb warriors, and it shows how changing your mind can transform weakness into strength. In this story, the change alters the future of the Earth itself.

Available NowBuy from Amazon Orange

Corr Syl the Terrible (print: $12.95, eBook: $2.99).  Both formats are available online from Amazon.  The print edition is also available from Barnes & Noble, CreateSpace, and neighborhood bookstores.

Reviews of Corr Syl the Terrible, A Science Fiction Novella

Reviews of the Science Fiction Novella Corr Syl the Terrible

Terrible Facebook-cover“In this sequel to Corr Syl the Warrior (2013), Rogers’ (Arizona Wildlife Notebook, 2014, etc.) hero takes on East Asian militants to save his best friend.

“Still reeling from the violence of his first mission as a warrior, Corr Syl returns to his family in the Wycliff District. He’s a member of the ancient Tsaeb race, all of whom are descended from various animals and capable of living harmoniously with the Earth. Corr and his friend Rhya Bright are descended from rabbits and can use their fur as camouflage and think in multiple “thoughtstreams.” As they travel to the Continental Center to work on human psychochemistry research, agents of Ya Zhou, the Imperial Minister of the Taoso nation, capture Rhya. Her duplicitous traveling partner, the lynx-descended Able Remington, facilitates the kidnapping, which will lead to a confrontation between Corr and Zhou—and with his warrior training and advanced senses, Corr is prepared for the challenge. He heads after Rhya in the miraculous IOZ-1899 airship, a Tsaeb creation that interacts with a pilot’s mind. However, Zhou has teamed up with the foul Lactella, a power-mad black widow from the previous novel whose venom allows her to control human hosts. Corr must not only save his friend, but prevent Zhou from raising an army that could dominate the world. In the slim second volume of Rogers’ YA series, he continues to develop his idea that humans should emulate animals, who live better within the bounds of nature, in order to ensure the prosperity of all life on Earth. The author doesn’t mince words on this subject; for example, Ryha mentions helping “humans overcome their mental limitations.” Environmental awareness remains at the plot’s forefront, as when Zhou serves water that is found to be a “stew of lead, arsenic, antibiotics, and hormone disrupters.” Most intriguing, though, is when Rogers merges science fiction with animal facts; Tsaeb warriors hold a discussion, for instance, by “using projected scents, sounds, movements, and thoughts, the electromagnetic fluxes generated by brain and body.” Swift pacing and an action-oriented plot quickly conclude this second Corr adventure, although not before setting up an intriguing third.  A riveting entry in an environmentally aware YA series.” –Kirkus Reviews


Corr Syl the Terrible by Garry Rogers is an exciting sci-fi novella with a very intriguing setting, a unique plot and a fascinating collection of characters. Imagine a world where the animals are a hundred times more advanced than humans, both intellectually and in their military skills. A world where human civilization is way behind that of the animals. Unbelievable, right? Well, this world exists in Corr Syl the Terrible and Garry Rogers makes it so easily believable through his flawless story telling. This intriguing tale comes to life right before your eyes, evoking all kinds of emotions. Some scenes gave me goose bumps, others sent a chill down my spine, while others made me smile and my heart soar, further demonstrating how Garry Rogers is a master at bringing out the right emotions in his readers.” –Faridah Nassozi, Barnes and Noble, Readers Favorite.


Corr Syl the Terrible is brilliant in its creativity and imagination. Technology and animals that are both alive is an interesting idea and presents thought provoking questions about what being alive really means. Corr Syl was a compelling character and I found that I really liked him. He had the heart of a hero and it was fun to see him interact with the various foes and companions that he encountered along the way.” –Katelyn Hensel, Barnes and Noble, Readers Favorite


“The Corr Syl series is set on Earth in a very distant future, where all surviving intelligent animal species (Tsaeb) have evolved and become humanoid. They keep humans in check (preferably through non-violent means) to ensure the preservation of the planet, which had previously seen a long era of war and had been ravaged by pollution.  Tsaeb are far superior to humans in intelligence and physical characteristics, and, most importantly, they are in tune with nature and each other.

“The aim of the series is undoubtedly to raise awareness about current environmental issues.  The author is a very active environmentalist and he is very clear in expressing his opinions on the current situation on our planet from the offset:

“Rhya left for the Continental Center to help correct a Human defect that limits intelligence.”

“Rhya scanned the food and ate the items containing the fewest toxins.  The water was a stew of lead, arsenic, antibiotics, and hormone disruptors, but she drank and spent a few minutes isolating the poisons.”

“Katydids weren’t food.  Even though unintelligent animals were sometimes eaten, calling them food was horrid and stupid.  Anyone who ate creatures with feelings should themselves be shot”

Corr Syl the Terrible” is the second book in the series, and its story continues from the previous novel, “Corr Syl the Warrior”.  Author Garry Rogers goes to great effort to allow readers to enjoy this piece as a stand-alone novella by providing us with|:

  • “What Came Before”:  one paragraph to set the scene;
  • “If You Haven’t Read Corr Syl the Warrior”: a short catch up of  the series premise, settings, events and protagonists;
  • “Appendix.  People and Places: a full list of all characters and locations, with Mandarin Chinese pronunciation tips.
  • “Afterward”: a short article that ties his fictional future world to current environmental issues and concerns, and the author’s own “Rebel Mouse” climate news newsletter.

“The third person narration follows the various main characters: Rhya, Corr, the human Ya Zhōu and the black widow Lactella – some bugs are also very intelligent in the future.

“The story is very imaginative and fast paced, with political intrigue, the quest for power, treachery, mysterious technology, humour and friendship.  As well as AhLatin, a simple made-up language!

“The main characters are well developed and likeable, being very noble of spirit.  Although there are clear pointers to a sequel, this episode concludes fully and satisfactorily, with no cliff-hangers.

“I really loved the two location maps that were included for the Wycliff District and Ya Zhōu Island.

“I would suggest you familiarise yourself with the Appendix beforehand.

“I also feel that, in order to fully appreciate the world created by Garry Rogers, the series should be read in order, as all of the main characters were in the first book and a lot of their development would have happened

“As a point of interest the author took inspiration from and paid homage to Edgar Rice Burroughs‘ “Tarzan the Terrible” (1921), the eighth book in the series, where Tarzan embarks on a journey to Pal-ul-don (“Land of Men”) to rescue Jane from her kidnappers.  The indigenous people, who capture Tarzan, are so impressed with his skills and resilience that they name him Tarzan-Jad-Guru (“Tarzan the Terrible”).  This book also contained a detailed map of the valley and a glossary of the local language.

“Finally a spaceship in Donald A. Wollheim‘s “Across Time: Quest in the Year One Million” (published under the pseudonym “David Grinnell” in 1957) and its EPL (“Ever Perfect Lieutenant”) were behind the very special sentient ship Z99 featured in Corr Syl the Terrible.”  Bookschatter (http://bookschatter.blogspot.com/p/about.html)


Corr Syl the Terrible by Garry Rogers is a very interesting tale about characters descended from animals who are living with humans on earth. It is a great story told more in a narrative way with intermittent dialogue. It is fast paced and treats the reader to an exciting warrior tale. I keep forgetting this is a young adult book. It will be enjoyed both by lovers of animals and warrior fantasies. Overall, the reading is interesting and full of action. It is a great combination of sci-fi and medieval ideas merged together. It reads a bit like the Redwall series and is a great read for the whole family.” –Anna del C. Dye Barnes and Noble, Readers Favorite


“Having already read the first part I was waiting for this sequel with anticipation. Thank goodness the author didn’t take too long in releasing the same, thereby offering me some relief. 🙂 Just like the previous book this is also about animals that are much more intelligent than us humans. Stories like these often remind of Aesop’s fables. Imagine living in a world like that! I am quite sure if animals were to rule the earth it would be a whole lot better than what it is. This book runs in the same vein as its predecessor with a number of twists and turns. There is something for everybody in this ebook: politics, betrayal, romance, friendship and then some more.

BTW, I wonder if I am the only one who is reminded of Satan’s temptation of Eve after reading this passage:

“He does have a secret. He hides it behind a simple shield that I could burn through in a second, but I won’t. Let him have his little secret, Rhya thought.”

Likewise, the following passage describes Zhou’s tyranny and paranoia at the same time:

“Zhōu’s interest soared. After many years of deception and betrayal, Zhōu was himself incapable of trust. He insured the loyalty of his generals and ambassadors with bribery, blackmail, kidnapping, and, when necessary, assassination. The one thing he needed most was better knowledge of his generals’ intentions. He had them watched, but he couldn’t intercept all their messages or anticipate their plans.”

“Overall, I suggest you definitely check out this book (as well as its prequel). The ending has a simple and positive message for the readers. See if you can say what comes next.” –Lanka Roo for Amazon


“I liked this quick short novella. It was a nice paced read not to fast and not choppy or fragmented. It has definitely whet my appetite for more of the series. I am going to pick up the first book Corr Syl the Warrior soon so I can see what happened to the characters previously. Thankfully with this novella you don’t need to have read the first book to know what was going on in the second!! Big bonus points for that!! The characters were well written and well developed the only issue I had was towards the end of the book when the bad guys ending was wrapped up in a paragraph It seemed a little rushed but I am looking forward to another part in this series.”  –Victoria Roberts (the Book Junkie)


“Corr Syl the Terrible” by Garry Rogers is a young adult science fiction and fantasy novel that is set on a version of Earth that includes animals who are intelligent and known as Tsaeb. Two of these beings are Corr Syl and Rhya Bright, warriors descended from rabbits, who are human-shaped yet retain many of the characteristics of their species. Unfortunately, Corr is not so sure he can overcome the conflict between his instincts and his training as a warrior but when Rhya  is threatened because of her work in Human psychochemistry to help humans achieve multiple thoughtstreams, he finds a way to rescue her, with the help of a remarkable ship, and they strive to make the OFTA (Organization for Fair Treatment for All) a reality, not a sham.


 “A really unique book involving a theme that many of us have at least thought about once. What if animals were highly intelligent? The storyline is very appealing and conveys a positive message for teens. The intense struggle between the factions has really been enjoyable to read and the characters are awe inspiring. Definitely a well written and highly imaginative tale that will appeal to teens and adults alike. Highly recommended.” –AubreyF for Barnes and Noble

“The concept that this author has used and applied towards this story that animals are just as bright, in most cases brighter, than humans is quite interesting and well thought about. His descriptions that he uses are incredible and make for visualization to be done without much trouble. This was a fast read as it is a novella but it isn’t without a great story and story line. As I was reading the story I kept catching myself thinking “what if”.
“If you are looking for a quick read that takes you to a new world in your mind and allows you to escape then pick up a copy of Corr Syl The Terrible.”  –Amy, Archaeolibrarian


YA SciFi Novella – Corr Syl the Terrible – Coming May 2, 2015

Corr Syl the Terrible by Garry Rogers

Corr Syl 5--HollandThis young-adult science-fiction story follows the warrior Corr Syl as he searches for kidnapped Rhya Bright.  It adds a chapter to the young warrior’s life, and creates a new challenge for Earth’s Tsaeb (silent T, long a) Warriors.

When a mysterious enemy takes Rhya away in a helicopter, Corr borrows an old Tsaeb aircraft and follows. The ship looks like an aerodynamically unsound blue egg, but it has advanced capabilities that Corr discovers as he defends against bombs, missiles, and a fiery trap in a waste incinerator. The search for Rhya takes Corr half way around the world to a dark volcanic island in the Pacific Ocean.

CoZhous Island 3x4 and one halfrr Syl and Rhya Bright are Tsaeb warriors. They are rabbit descendants with gray fur, auburn eyes, and long whiskers. Like all Tsaeb, they love humor. Corr is a becoming a master of the corny one-liner–If at first you don’t succeed, don’t try skydiving—that’s Corr.

Humans are a recent addition to the Tsaeb civilization. They resemble Tsaeb mammals, but they tend to have more bare skin.  Human intelligence is not well-developed.  Most members of the species are unable to foresee the consequences of their actions and so they are a continuing source of environmental problems.

Corr Syl the Terrible has a linear plot focused on rescuing Rhya Bright. But the book is also about Corr’s problem with taking life. Corr’s training taught him the mortal weaknesses of hundreds of species, but he can’t reconcile killing with his natural urge to protect life. How far should one go in defense of self and friends? Corr returns to this question throughout the book, and in the end, finds an answer that changes Earth’s future.

Corr Syl the Terrible ($9.95, 120 pages, 6 x 9, paperback, ISBN: ) will be available at neighborhood and online bookstores in early May, 2015. Excerpts and an advance reader copy are available here.

P.S.  No one likes the cover–working on a new one.

Choose the Cover for Corr Syl the Terrible, New SciFi Novella

Here are two proposed covers for Corr Syl the Terrible, the sequel to Corr Syl the Warrior.  Which do you like?  Answer below the covers.

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Lactella: A Make-Believe Story of True Evil

Evil Lactella

Warning, “Lactella” is an evil character. This is not a nice story.

 

Ivan Johns’ Tragic Encounter

Adult_Female_Black_WidowIvanstor Johns, the new Mountainview City Manager, had one eccentricity. He cut his own hair in an uncommon style: short on the sides and long in the back. No one, not even his family, knew the secret it hid. Beneath the long hair, like a fat tick, a huge black widow spider clung to Johns’ neck. The spider’s claws and webs and the powerful chelicerae bracketing her mouth held her fast. Her hollow fangs reached deep into the City Manager’s flesh. In public, Johns appeared calm and relaxed. In private, the spider liked to make him beg and scream.

The strange pairing had been the result of a misfortunate accident. Intelligent spiders are rare among the Tsaeb, and those who exist tend to keep the shape and some of the instinctive behaviors of their progenitors. Black widow spider hatchlings still spin the tiny web strands that originally serve as sails and carry the spiderlings to new, and hopefully richer, habitats. Intelligent black widows snip those first webs and prevent the spiderlings from floating away. On rare occasions, they fail to snip in time, and the spiderlings are lost.

On a stormy summer day, a spider egg hatched unattended. Wind caught the baby spider’s web and carried her far from her family home. Such waifs rarely survive to become adults. The small spider survived because of luck, and because of her unusually high intelligence. Deposited in the heart of a large city, she grew while locked in a daily struggle to survive alone.

The spider’s quick mind kept her alive, but she did not learn the body and mind controls that a normal Tsaeb family life would have given her. She received none of the great store of Tsaeb experience and wisdom. Instead, she learned only how to avoid threats and satisfy hunger.

The spider found that other creatures broadcast sensory images. When she inserted her fangs into them, her inherited mental powers enabled her to sense the electromagnetic fluxes surrounding their muscles and nerves. She soon learned to replace or guide the impulses with her own, and she finally began to gain control over the muscles and senses of her victims. Her power became so complete that she could keep an animal conscious and calm while she fed. As her size and ability increased, she learned to use larger creatures for transport.

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Susan

The first big step on the spider’s path to Ivan Johns was her discovery of a little girl named Susan. The accidental offspring of a drug addict and an alcoholic, Susan had lived an abnormal life. When her mother left Susan behind to become an entertainer for her dealer’s customers, Susan had only her father, a violent alcoholic. Often beaten and treated to other abuses, Susan’s body bore lesions that rarely healed before the next attack.

In her sixth year, Susan awoke one morning to an empty apartment. After a week, and after every dried scrap of discarded food had been consumed, Susan left the apartment for the first time. Walking unsteadily down the shadowy hall between silent doorways, she came to a stairwell and crept down to a dark alley.

Just a few steps down the alley Susan saw one of the unintelligent cats the Humans kept. The cat had its head in a sack, but when it sensed Susan and turned toward her, it appeared well fed and unafraid. Susan held out her hands and approached, and the cat sat and watched her for a moment, but then it trotted down the alley. Susan wanted to follow, but the sack held the remains of a dinner. She sat on a pile of newspapers and began digging through the sack.

The spider had been studying the cat from beneath a nearby garbage bin. When Susan came along, the spider’s ambition for a larger host soared. While Susan ate, the spider stunned the rat it was controlling and leapt up beside the little girl. Susan noticed the spider and started to rise, but the spider sprang onto Susan’s arm and injected her with venom. Then the spider moved out of sight beneath Susan’s dress and began taking control.

The spider found it difficult to control Susan, but after numerous partial failures that required more venom injections, the spider learned to direct the little girl’s movements. She resumed the nocturnal routine she had developed with the rats.

At first, the spider controlled Susan’s muscles, but not her thoughts. The many electrical flashes and fluxes in Susan’s brain varied more than those in the brains of rats and other small animals. There were waves and sparks with no connection to the child’s movements. During an encounter with another child, the spider realized that some of the sparks connected to sounds Susan made with her throat and mouth.

The spider tried to make Susan speak and had immediate success. The other child backed away, but the spider didn’t notice; she was learning to talk, and had Susan gobbling and snorting. The spider soon began connecting the sounds with feelings, actions, and senses. Her near-perfect memory and quick mind enabled her to build vocabulary and grasp structure almost overnight. Within a week, the spider could understand Susan’s thoughts and could direct the child to form sentences.

Susan had learned from her father that obedience produced the least pain, so she did not resist when she felt the urges the spider produced, and the shadowy presence wasn’t frightening at first.

Solitary by nature, the spider’s circumstances had given her no opportunity to learn to socialize with parents or friends. She tried to talk with Susan. Needing a name for the girl to use, the spider chose Lactella. The talks didn’t amount to much. Susan hadn’t ever had a real conversation, and she didn’t know how to play. Susan didn’t know how to describe the pain and fear she had endured, and when she did share something, the spider found it depressing.

Lactella tried to do things with Susan. Susan knew how to hop, skip, and run, but she hadn’t learned about hopscotch, skip rope, or any other games. Lactella became bored with the things Susan knew, but she found she could stimulate pulses along Susan’s nerves that made the child’s body jerk and twitch in odd ways.

Lactella found that she could darken Susan’s senses until the child became frightened, cried, and finally began screaming. This was exciting, but it attracted dangerous attention. Large people came sometimes, and though Lactella hid Susan well, she feared discovery above all else.

Lactella also learned about laughter. She witnessed it a few times in the homeless wanderers Susan encountered, but she didn’t understand how to produce it. The heavy barking breaths choked through Susan’s constricted throat were monstrous, the sounds of horrible madness.

Lactella kept the girl immobilized and hidden during the day, and let her creep through alleys in search of food at night. She let the child eat, but she did not consider its health.

When the pair came upon a male spider, Lactella followed ancient instincts, obtained sperm, and attacked the producer. Later she attached her pale yellow egg sack under Susan’s arm. As the eggs hatched, Lactella used her feeding solutions to soften the child’s flesh. She watched her offspring, curious to see how they would mature. Infection developed and spread under Susan’s skin. Lactella could see something was wrong, but she did not know what to do. None of her firstborn survived.

Soon Susan became weak and unsteady on her feet. When at last Lactella could not force the child to rise, she withdrew her fangs and claws and, ignoring the feeble sobs of the small ragged ball beside a waste bin, went hunting for a fresh human host.  She found a tear in a window screen at the back of the nearest house.  As she entered, she saw the sleeping form of Ivan Johns, and elation filled her.  Something great was about to begin.