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Nested Stories told by the Protagonist

The protagonist in a novel often imagines or recalls events that are not part of the main story.  Nesting small stories within a story is a common literary device sometimes referred to as mise en abyme.  An article in Wikipedia discusses the many types of nested stories.  Here I am referring to stories narrated by a protagonist and nested well with a main story. 

Nesting self-contained stories within a larger narrative is probably as old a technique as story telling itself.  The storyteller often draws the story from a remembered experience, but sometimes tells a fictional story heard or invented.  A nested story may make up the bulk of a chapter; it can even stand alone, seemingly unrelated to the main story.  Steinbeck uses the latter in his depiction of the two boys in Chapter 26 in Cannery Row

Some books are composed entirely of stand-alone stories framed by a unifying plot.  Canterbury Tales and One Thousand and One Nights are examples.  Collections of children’s stories such as Winnie the Pooh are similar, but repeating characters, not the plot unite them.  One of my projects is a collection of children’s stories united by a single character whose excesses of ego and poor judgment, creates circumstances that form the plot for each story. 

Nested stories serve many purposes.  Steinbeck used them to give insights to his theme.  The stories can also show character motivations and they can reveal details of history and background for the main story.  Thus, they can support the reality of the main story. 

Here is an example of a nested story told by the protagonist in the novel Corr Syl the Warrior.  It is contained within a chapter, and it is obvious fiction.  It serves to elaborate on the background of the protagonist’s culture and his occupation, and it foreshadows a tragic scene involving the protagonist and a childhood friend. Continue reading

Book Review–Clark. Writing Tools.

Book Review–Clark.

Clark, Roy Peter.  2006.  Writing tools: 50 essential strategies for every writer.  Little Brown and Company, New York.  260p.

Clark argues that writing is more a craft than an art.  He introduces 50 tools that are useful for writing fiction, nonfiction, and both.  The 50 chapters are clear, succinct, and well-illustrated with examples from work by Clark and other authors.

The book is divided into four parts:  Nuts and Bolts, Special Effects, Blueprints, and Useful Habits.  Each chapter is followed by workshop exercises.

Clark’s tools can be used for fiction, nonfiction, and combinations of the two.  Tool 25 describes and illustrates the difference between reports and stories. “Use one to render information, the other to render experience.”  Clark shows how the reporter’s five Ws and H shift their meaning for the storyteller. And he illustrates how writers combine the meanings to produce powerful effects.

Tool 50 presents a simple blueprint to guide the use of the tools.  The blueprint divides writing into five sequential steps that lead to finished products.

Other writing texts cover Clark’s tools from different angles and with different examples.  I think many beginning writers will find Clark’s argument and his clear style will give them confidence and techniques they can use to construct their own projects.

Recommended.  Find this book and others on writing at the Writer’s Bookstore.

Grammar and Composition

I removed Grammarly from my computer. It caused MS Word to stutter and hesitate, and it took too long to produce anything useful.

Grammarly spent most of its time making ridiculous synonym suggestions. And it wasted my time with circular suggestions.  When I followed Grammerly’s suggestion for revising a sentence, I sometimes got a new suggestion that would reproduce the original construction. I did like the “squinting modifier” advice, but not the hour the program took to find and point out the single occurrence. Grammarly gets a laugh or two, but I cannot recommend it for serious writing.

Richard Nordquist, Ask.com

I do recommend the Grammar & Composition articles by Richard Nordquist on Ask.com. Five stars.