Writing

When I started writing fiction, I read books, articles, blog posts, and Internet commentaries on writing techniques. I joined local writer groups and writing circles, and I followed hundreds of writers and groups on the Internet. I created an elaborate backstory for a world like Earth except that human-like intelligence was always present in all higher organisms. After I published the first novels, I repeated what I had learned about writing in blog posts and school lectures and learned even more from readers and writers. Recently, I started compiling a series of methods books that would bring the techniques together in focused narratives. I began with a general guide (“Writer’s Primer”). Then, acknowledging AFOSA’s focus on nature conservation, I assembled a methods booklet for nature writing (“Life on Land”). After that, I began on genre methods booklets. One of them covers romance short stories. To taste my own medicine, I decided to practice romance short story techniques with a series of stories about a romance set amidst our climate-change disaster. This is the first story.

Fire Season: Love in the Time of Climate Change

Francis Ralph Graham

First Smoke (Summer 2023)

The coffee maker in the university geography department sputtered its last drops as Mia Allen checked her watch. Eight forty-seven on a Tuesday morning in late May, and she was running behind schedule for what Professor Martinez had called “the most important meeting of your graduate career.” Her hands trembled slightly as she reached for her backpack—too much caffeine, not enough breakfast, and the weight of knowing this interview could determine whether her summer comprised meaningful fieldwork or scrambling for a last-minute retail job.

The department secretary, Mrs. Chen, looked up from sorting mail with the patient smile that suggested she’d witnessed countless nervous students over her thirty years behind that desk. Her fingers moved through envelopes with practiced efficiency, separating the urgent federal correspondence from routine university mail—each envelope representing someone’s career trajectory.

“Deep breaths, dear. Dr. Martinez doesn’t bite, despite what the undergraduates claim.” Mrs. Chen paused, holding up a thick envelope marked with the Bureau of Land Management logo. “Though I suppose you’re more worried about the BLM position than facing Ricardo.”

Mia nodded, throat too tight for words. Two years of coursework in biogeography, climatology, and land-use analysis had led to this moment. Through the department’s windows, she could see maintenance crews already watering the campus landscaping despite the early hour—drought restrictions meant only morning irrigation was permitted.

The hallway stretched before her, lined with bulletin boards displaying conference announcements and research opportunities. A faded poster from last year’s American Association of Geographers meeting caught her eye: Climate Change Adaptation in Western Rangelands. The photograph showed cracked earth and struggling sagebrush beneath an impossibly blue sky, edges curling where tape had lost its grip to repeated temperature fluctuations.

Dr. Martinez’s office door stood slightly ajar, voices drifting through the gap. Mia recognized her advisor’s accented English mixed with another voice—deeper, more hesitant. She knocked twice and waited, hearing her pulse in her ears.

“Come in, come in.” Dr. Martinez gestured toward an empty chair beside another student, a young man with sun-lightened brown hair and calloused hands that spoke of work beyond classroom walls. His worn boots showed scuff marks that suggested actual field experience rather than fashion choices.

“Mia Allen, meet Samuel Powell. You’ll be working together this summer if everything goes according to plan.”

Samuel—Sam, she corrected herself after catching his quick grimace at the formal name—half-rose from his chair. When he extended his hand, she noticed the constellation of small scars across his knuckles, evidence of outdoor labor. His palm was warm and surprisingly gentle for its obvious strength, the contact lasting a moment longer than strictly professional courtesy required.

“Sam’s thesis examines post-fire invasive species succession,” Dr. Martinez continued, settling behind his desk with the measured movements of someone who’d conducted hundreds of these meetings. Papers rustled as he organized their files, each sound sharp in the morning quiet. “Your livestock grazing research complements his work perfectly. Both projects examine human-induced vegetation changes, though from different angles.”

Mia studied Sam’s profile as he turned toward their advisor. Something in his posture suggested complete focus, the intensity of someone who’d fought for this opportunity. His clothes—faded jeans, a button-down shirt that had seen better days—reminded her of home, of the practical approach to life that came from understanding consequences.

A siren wailed in the distance, growing louder before fading toward the hospital. Sam’s shoulders tensed momentarily at the sound, an unconscious reaction that made Mia wonder what experiences had shaped that response.

“The BLM district office has requested two graduate assistants for the summer,” Dr. Martinez continued, his voice cutting through the external noise. “They’re facing unprecedented challenges this fire season. Three major blazes already, and we’re barely into June. Early snowmelt, record-breaking spring temperatures, fuel moisture content approaching critical levels two months ahead of typical patterns.”

Through the office window, Mia could see students moving between classes with the unhurried pace of those whose biggest worry was upcoming finals. The contrast struck her—here they sat discussing real-world crises while twenty feet away someone complained loudly about a broken vending machine.

“The positions involve split duties,” Dr. Martinez said, pulling out two thick folders. The paper stock felt substantial, official in a way that made Mia’s pulse quicken. “Mia, you’ll work primarily with the land-use planning office under Diana Walsh. Expect long days reviewing grazing permits, conducting field surveys, learning how policy translates to ground-truth conditions.”

He handed her a folder marked with the Bureau’s logo, its weight representing months of preparation condensed into a single opportunity. Sam received his folder with similar reverence, though she noticed his thumb worrying the corner as Dr. Martinez spoke.

“Sam, you’ll be assigned to fire dispatch operations under Jack Morrison. Real-time decision making, resource allocation, communications coordination. Some office work, yes, but during active fires, you’ll be gathering information that directly affects firefighter safety.”

The weight of actual responsibility settled between them like shared understanding. This wasn’t academic theory—their analysis and recommendations would affect real landscapes, real livelihoods, potentially real lives.

Dr. Martinez leaned forward, his expression growing serious. “Dr. Hoffman will conduct your final interviews this afternoon. She’s worked with BLM for fifteen years and knows exactly what they need. Be prepared to discuss your research and your field experience.”

Mia’s stomach tightened. Field experience meant the required summer mapping course and various research trips, but nothing approaching the intensity Dr. Martinez described. She glanced at Sam, wondering if his confidence came from more extensive outdoor work or if he was simply better at hiding nervousness.

“Questions before you prepare for this afternoon?”

Sam cleared his throat, the sound rough. “Dr. Martinez, the fire assignment—what will I be doing?” He paused, fingers drumming once against his chair arm before stilling.

“Jack Morrison runs one of the safest operations in the region,” Dr. Martinez replied. “You won’t be fighting fires, Sam. Your job is information gathering and communication. But you’ll be close enough to understand why this work matters.”

Outside, another siren began its urgent wail, this one heading toward the mountains where smoke had been visible yesterday evening. Both students turned toward the window instinctively.

“Both of you will,” Dr. Martinez finished.

They left the office together, walking down the hallway as other students hurried past with the energy of those anticipating summer break. Mia felt suspended between her old life as a graduate student and whatever was coming next. The fluorescent lighting seemed harsh after the windows in Dr. Martinez’s office, artificial and insufficient.

“Coffee?” Sam asked as they reached the main lobby, then immediately looked uncertain. “I mean, if you want to compare notes before the interview. I know nothing about Dr. Hoffman except that she apparently reduces grown graduate students to tears during field methods.”

Mia laughed despite her nervousness, the sound echoing off the lobby’s hard surfaces. “I survived her Introduction to Soil Science course. Barely. She has this way of asking questions that makes you wonder if you know anything.”

The student union’s coffee shop bustled with end-of-semester energy. They found a small table near the windows, settling across from each other and the folders Dr. Martinez had given them. Around them, conversations flowed with summer plans, internships, and the universal student concerns for finals week stress.

Sam opened his folder, immediately closing it again. His fingers drummed against the table surface—a nervous habit, she realized. “So,” he said, “livestock grazing research. That sounds like you actually know what you’re doing in the field.”

“My family runs cattle,” Mia said, surprising herself with the admission. She usually downplayed her agricultural background among academics who sometimes viewed practical experience with suspicion. “Small operation compared to most in the west, but I grew up understanding how livestock interact with landscape.” She paused, remembering last summer’s drought conditions. “What remains of landscape, anyway.”

Sam’s expression shifted with recognition. “Similar background. My dad grows corn and soybeans in Iowa, but I spent summers working construction to pay for school. Hand-built fencing, erosion control projects.” He looked down at his palms, evidence of that labor written in callused skin. “Got interested in fire behavior after watching a grassland burn near our place three years ago. The way invasive species moved in afterward—like they were waiting for the opportunity.”

Something in his voice made Mia study his face more carefully. He spoke about fire with personal understanding, not just academic interest.

“That must have been intense,” she said.

“Changed everything I thought I knew about landscape stability,” Sam replied, his coffee forgotten as he leaned forward. “Made me realize that our assumptions on ecosystem recovery might be outdated. Climate may be changing too fast.”

The weight of that observation settled between them. Mia had reached similar uncertainty through her own research, watching native grasses struggle to reestablish after cattle grazing. Her father’s weathered face came to mind—the quiet frustration with agricultural extension recommendations that failed to address the flash droughts becoming commonplace.

Through the coffee shop windows, she could see acampus maintenance crew removing a sprinkler system. They moved with practiced efficiency, working with the drought limitations that now shaped every decision.

“Dr. Martinez mentioned this is an unprecedented fire season,” she said, flipping through her folder’s contents. Maps showed burn scars scattered across the western landscape like broken glass, some representing devastated communities and all displaced wildlife. “Three major fires already.”

“It hasn’t rained or snowed since February this year,” Sam said, looking at a climate summary in his materials. “The snowpack is thirty percent below normal, spring temperatures are averaging four degrees above the twenty-year normal. Fuel moisture content is at critical levels two months ahead of typical fire season.”

They studied the documents, occasionally sharing striking statistics or revealing maps. Mia appreciated Sam’s methodical approach—he was connecting the data without jumping to conclusions. His marginal notes revealed serious intent to understand the information.

A group of undergraduates at the next table erupted in laughter about their summer beach plans, the sound jarring against the data spread before them. Sam glanced over, his expression thoughtful rather than annoyed.

“Listen,” Mia said after they’d spent twenty minutes absorbed in climate data and fire projections, “I know we’re technically competing for these positions, but would you want to study together for the interview? Dr. Hoffman’s questions are notoriously unpredictable, but maybe we can prepare for the basics.”

Sam’s smile brightened his entire face, revealing warmth that had been hidden beneath interview nervousness. “Absolutely. Two perspectives are better than one, especially when facing an interrogation.”

She felt her own face flush with unexpected pleasure at his enthusiasm. The reaction surprised her—when had she started wanting his company?

They spent the next three hours testing each other on fire behavior principles, grazing impact assessments, and land-use policy frameworks. Sam’s knowledge of meteorological factors impressed Mia, while her understanding of soil science and vegetation dynamics filled gaps in his preparation.

The afternoon light shifted as they worked, shadows drifting across their shared table. Occasionally, their hands would brush when reaching for the same document, each contact creating a small electric moment that neither acknowledged but both noticed.

“You know,” Sam said during a break in their review session, “this feels more like collaboration than competition.”

“Maybe that’s what’s needed,” Mia replied. “The environmental challenges are too complex for individual perspectives.”

Something in her voice made him look up from his notes, meeting her eyes directly. The library’s quiet hum surrounded them—keyboards clicking, pages turning, the distant conversation of other students wrestling with their own academic challenges.

“After this morning,” Sam said quietly, “I’m hoping we both get selected.”

By the time they walked toward Dr. Hoffman’s office for their interviews, they moved in a private energy field along a hallway that seemed longer than usual.

“Good luck,” Mia said as they stood outside the professor’s door.

“You too,” Sam replied. He hesitated, then reached out to briefly squeeze her shoulder. The contact was warm and reassuring, lasting just long enough without crossing any boundaries.

Dr. Hoffman’s interview proved as challenging as expected. She grilled them on technical knowledge and field experience. When she asked Mia to describe how she would change traditional grazing management practices in response to climate change, the answer flowed from months of study, a lifetime of familiarity, and new perspectives added by Sam.

“Interesting,” Dr. Hoffman said, making notes. Her pen scratched against paper with decisive strokes. “And how would you respond if local ranchers disagreed with your recommendations? These are people whose families have worked the same land for generations.”

Mia recalled her father’s conversations with neighbors, the shared concerns the sense of cooperation.

“I’d start by listening,” she said. “Ranchers have generational knowledge on their specific landscapes. My job would be synthesizing that local expertise with broader research findings, looking for solutions that work both ecologically and culturally.”

Dr. Hoffman’s expression revealed nothing, but she nodded before dismissing Mia to wait in the hallway.

Sam emerged from his interview thirty minutes later, looking drained but cautiously optimistic. They walked together toward the parking lot, not willing to speculate on outcomes.

The late afternoon heat hit them as they stepped outside, carrying the scent of stressed vegetation and distant smoke. The campus trees showed signs of moisture stress, some leaves already curling despite the early date.

“Regardless of what happens,” Sam said as they reached Mia’s car, “today was valuable. I learned more in those three hours studying with you than I did in weeks of solo preparation.”

“Same here,” Mia replied firmly.

Her car’s interior was hot despite being parked in shade. She started the engine and rolled her window down, grateful for air conditioning while noting the irony of burning fossil fuels to escape heat intensified by climate change.

“Maybe we could keep in touch regardless of the BLM outcome,” she said. “Compare notes on our research?”

“I’d like that,” Sam said, then hesitated, as if considering whether to say more. The parking lot’s asphalt shimmered with heat waves, distorting the surrounding air. “Actually, I was wondering if you’d want to grab dinner sometime. Not just about the interviews or research. I enjoyed spending time with you today.”

The invitation hung between them, and Mia studied Sam’s face, noting how he calmly waited for her response, despite the hope clearly visible in his expression.

“Yes,” she said, surprising herself with the certainty in her voice. “I’d like that.”

They exchanged phone numbers, fingers brushing as he handed back her phone. The contact sent warmth up her arm, and a surprising physical awareness.

Dr. Hoffman called two days later with news that both students had been selected for the BLM positions. They would report to the district office in three weeks, after completing final exams and defending their thesis proposals.

“Congratulations,” Dr. Hoffman said, her usually stern voice carrying a note of warmth. “But understand what you’re signing up for. Climate change is accelerating faster than our institutional responses. You’ll be learning in real-time how to adapt management practices to conditions we’ve never faced before.”

That evening, Sam called to share the news and suggest a celebration dinner.

They met at a small restaurant near campus, the kind of place that attracted graduate students with generous portions and reasonable prices. They leaned together, charged with the energy of shared success and the opportunity to explore new ideas.

“Part of me is frightened,” Mia admitted over dessert, watching Sam’s hands as he gestured while talking. His fingers moved with unconscious grace, and she wondered what those hands would feel like cupping her face. “What happens to the management of grazing impacts and vegetation dynamics, when conditions are constantly changing?”

“I keep thinking about that grassland fire I witnessed,” Sam said, his voice growing quiet. “How quickly everything is becoming irrelevant. But that’s also why this work matters. We need to acknowledge the changes and adapt.”

The restaurant’s windows showed the last light of an early summer evening, sunset colors muted by atmospheric haze. Other diners filled the room with conversations concerning summer plans and job prospects, their voices creating a backdrop of normalcy unnatural beneath the weight of environmental crisis.

“Can I ask you something?” Sam said as they prepared to leave. “What made you switch from agricultural economics to geography? I mean, with your family background, the economics track seems like a natural fit.”

Mia considered the question, thinking back to the moment her academic focus had shifted. “Three years ago, during a severe drought, I watched my dad make hard decisions on which pastures to rest, which cattle to sell, uncertain if he could keep the operation viable. The economic models I was learning didn’t account for directional environmental change. They assumed there was a stable baseline that might no longer exist.”

She paused, remembering her father’s weathered face as he studied dying grassland, his quiet frustration with agricultural extension recommendations that failed to address the flash droughts becoming routine.

“I realized I needed to understand the physical systems first—how landscapes actually function under stress—before economics could provide useful guidance. You can’t develop sustainable economic models for systems you don’t comprehend.”

Sam nodded slowly, his coffee cup forgotten in his hands. “That makes perfect sense. For me, it was watching how quickly invasive species colonized the burned area. Traditional ideas about primary and secondary succession didn’t apply. Made me wonder how we were entering some new condition rather than a normal fluctuation.”

They parted that evening with plans to stay in touch throughout the rest of the semester. As Mia drove home, she caught herself anticipating Sam’s texts about his research with enthusiasm that extended well beyond professional interest.

Three weeks later, they met at the BLM district office, a low building surrounded by vehicles equipped for fieldwork and serious operational responsibilities. The parking lot’s asphalt radiated heat waves despite the early morning hour, and the surrounding landscape showed obvious stress from prolonged drought conditions.

Diana Walsh, Mia’s supervisor, was in her forties with graying hair pulled back in a practical ponytail and hands that showed decades of outdoor work. She greeted Mia with a firm handshake and an appraising look.

“Hope you’re ready to dive in,” Diana said, leading Mia toward the land-use planning office. Her stride was brisk and efficient. “We’ve received sixteen applications for grazing permit modifications in the past month alone. Ranchers requesting emergency adjustments to traditional rotation schedules because of drought conditions. Your job is helping us evaluate which modifications are scientifically sound and which ones might cause long-term damage.”

The office activity that felt different from university settings. No one was laughing or even smiling. Maps covered every available wall surface, marked with colored pins showing active projects, pending permits, and areas of concern.

Diana paused beside a large topographical map, her finger tracing boundaries marked in red. “See this area? Three generations of the Morrison family—no relation to Jack in fire dispatch—have run cattle there using rotation patterns established by the grandfather. Now they’re requesting permission to graze areas that were off-limits during drought years.”

She turned to face Mia directly. “Problem is, those off-limits areas are the seed source for recovery. Use them now, we might solve this year’s crisis while creating next decade’s catastrophe.”

Across the building, Sam was meeting Jack Morrison, a lean man whose sun-weathered face and calm demeanor suggested someone comfortable with high-pressure decision making. Morrison’s office contained multiple computer screens displaying real-time weather data, satellite imagery, and communication equipment that connected him to fire crews across the region.

“First thing you need to understand,” Morrison said, settling behind his desk while gesturing toward a large monitor displaying current drought conditions, “is that everything we thought we knew about fire behavior is changing. Fuel loads, humidity levels, wind patterns, temperature extremes—all the variables we use for prediction models are shifting.”

Red zones dominated the display, indicating extreme drought conditions. Morrison’s weather-beaten hands moved across his keyboard with surprising dexterity, pulling up additional data layers.

“Your job this summer is helping us adapt our response protocols to new realities. Traditional fire season used to run from July through September. Now it’s April through November.” He paused, looking directly at Sam. “That’s not just a longer season—it’s a completely different operational framework.”

Morrison leaned back in his chair, studying Sam’s expression. “Had a crew leader tell me yesterday that fighting fires now feels like playing chess against an opponent who changes the rules mid-game. Twenty years of experience counting for less each season.”

By lunch time, both Mia and Sam had been immersed in briefings that revealed the complexity of their assignments. They met in the building’s small break room, comparing notes while eating lunches they’d been advised to pack.

“Diana showed me grazing permit applications from ranchers requesting permission to use traditionally protected areas,” Mia said, unwrapping a sandwich. “Areas that were set aside to preserve native plant communities during drought periods. But the drought is so severe that even the protected areas might be the only viable option for maintaining livestock operations.”

Sam nodded grimly, his own lunch untouched. “Morrison’s dealing with similar impossible choices. We have half the firefighting resources we need, fuel conditions that are dangerously extreme, and weather patterns that render prediction models useless. He said they’re essentially improvising solutions in real-time.”

The weight of responsibility was settling over them. Through the break room window, they could see the district’s fleet of emergency vehicles, each one representing someone’s safety and livelihood.

“I keep thinking about Dr. Martinez’s comment concerning fresh perspectives,” Mia said, taking a sip of water that did little to ease her dry throat. “What if our lack of experience is actually valuable?” The situation so incongruous the two graduate trainees shared amused expressions. “We’re not invested in traditional approaches that might not work anymore.”

“That’s simultaneously terrifying and inspiring,” Sam replied, finally taking a bite of his sandwich.

A radio crackled to life down the hall, calling for units to investigate a smoke report. Both students turned toward the sound instinctively, listening to voices coordinating a response. The casual lunch atmosphere gone for good.

“Gets easier,” said a voice from the doorway. They turned to see a woman in her fifties wearing the practical clothing of someone who spent considerable time outdoors. “The constant state of readiness, I mean. I’m Janet Martinez—no relation to your Dr. Martinez. Work vegetation surveys with Diana’s team.”

She poured coffee that looked like it had been brewing for hours. “Twenty-three years with BLM, and I’ve never seen conditions like this. But you learn to deal with uncertainty. Has to become normal, or you’d go crazy with worry.”

Janet studied them both with experienced eyes. “You’re the graduate students Diana and Jack have been bragging about. Good. We need people who understand that everything’s changing. Too many folks still trying to manage twenty-first-century problems with twentieth-century solutions.”

That evening, after their first full day of orientation and initial assignments, they walked together toward the parking lot. The setting sun painted the landscape in shades of gold and amber, beautiful in a way that hid the underlying stress conditions.

“Want to grab dinner? We should debrief today’s experiences. Compare observations.”

Mia smiled at his careful phrasing, recognizing her own uncertainty on how to navigate the transition from professional collaboration to personal interest. “Yes,” she said. “I think debriefing is essential.”

The restaurant they chose was quieter than their campus celebration diner, filled with locals who seemed to carry the day’s heat and stress in their postures. Conversations at nearby tables touched on water restrictions, fire danger ratings, and the economic impact of drought.

Over burgers and coffee, they processed their first day’s experiences.

“Diana mentioned that three major ranching operations in the district have sold their cattle,” Mia said, watching Sam’s face in the soft restaurant lighting. “That’s decades of careful breeding, family legacies, entire ways of life”

“As we expected, they’re seeing fire behavior that doesn’t match any historical patterns,” Sam replied, his voice dropping as he noticed other diners listening. “Fires moving faster, burning hotter, jumping traditional barriers like roads and rivers. Morrison mentioned one crew that had to deploy emergency shelters because their escape route was cut off by unexpected wind shifts.”

The weight of the day’s revelations settled between them. Around them, other conversations continued—complaints about utility bills, excitement for weekend plans, discussions of local politics—normal life proceeding while they grappled with evidence of accelerating environmental crisis.

“It’s strange,” Mia said, “how routine everything feels here while we’re dealing with what’s essentially an unfolding emergency. People are adapting so gradually that the change feels manageable, even though the cumulative impact is going to be enormous.”

Sam considered this while watching the restaurant’s evening crowd. A family at the corner table was celebrating a child’s birthday, their laughter bright against the subdued conversations elsewhere. “Maybe that’s how major changes always happen. Incrementally, until one day you look around and realize everything has shifted.”

“Can I tell you something?” Mia said as they prepared to leave. The restaurant had grown quieter, most diners heading home to prepare for tomorrow’s responsibilities. “Today was the first time my academic work felt genuinely important. Not just intellectually interesting or useful for career advancement, but actually meaningful.”

“I know exactly what you mean,” Sam replied, his hand briefly covering hers on the table. The contact was warm and welcome, lasting long enough to send its warmth spiraling through her before he pulled away. “We’re getting to work on serious problems.”

They walked to their cars through air that still held the day’s heat and the western horizon maintained a faint glow from the sun’s passage. The sound of their footsteps echoed off the asphalt, creating an intimate pocket of shared space.

“Same time tomorrow?” Sam asked as they reached her car, and Mia realized he was asking about more than their work schedules.

“Yes,” she said, feeling certainty settle in her chest like a small flame taking hold. When he leaned closer to say goodnight, she caught his scent—soap and sunscreen and something distinctly him that made her want to step closer rather than maintain professional distance.

As they drove home through darkness punctuated by distant lightning that promised no relief from the drought, both carried the knowledge that whatever challenges emerged, they wouldn’t face them alone. Behind them, the BLM office building stood dark except for the communications center, where skeleton crews maintained watch over weather patterns and fire danger indicators that would shape tomorrow’s decisions.

In the distance, barely visible against the star-filled horizon, a thin column of smoke rose from what would become another battle in the most challenging fire season on record. But tonight, driving home with windows down and radio playing softly, they thought not of the work ahead but of the unexpected gift of finding someone who understood both the weight of meaningful work and the courage required to face an uncertain future with hope intact.

Love, like fire, could start with the smallest spark—but under the right conditions, both will transform entire landscapes.

“Corr Syl the Terrible” My New Science Fiction Novella Is On Sale Today

My New #ScienceFiction Novella, Corr Syl the Terrible Is Now On Sale

This STerrible Facebook-coverciFi novella for teen readers follows Corr Syl’s struggle to rescue Rhya Bright who has been kidnapped by Ya Zhōu, a brilliant Human and ruthless dictator.  Corr Syl the Terrible is on sale at Amazon.com for $2.99.  Buy it now.

Corr has discovered he hates killing and is brooding about his future as a farmer or librarian when he learns that someone has kidnapped his true love, Rhya Bright. Ya Zhōu, seeking to remove threats to his power, uses Rhya as bait to draw Corr into a trap. But when Corr captures his would-be assassins and Rhya overcomes a room full of guards and almost escapes, Zhōu realizes he is the one in danger and flees with Rhya, leaving false trails and traps in his wake. Dodging bombs, missiles, and jet fighters, Corr follows Rhya and Zhōu to a fortress inside a dead volcano where the final trap awaits.

Zhōu has Rhya taken away in a helicopter. Desperate to follow, Corr borrows an ancient warcraft from a museum. Z99, as the ship introduces itself, is sentient and constructed with technology based on the physics of dark matter and quantum relationships. The ship proves an invaluable asset as Corr’s journey takes him to Xi’ou, the capital of the Taoso nation. Though ostensibly ruled by the Emperor, the nation’s true power lies in the hands of Ya Zhōu, the Human Minister who commands a network of assassins and spies.

Though he began his mission alone, Corr meets unexpected allies like the young Cai family, who want to see Ya Zhōu deposed for the return of true peace and freedom. When Corr tracks Rhya to Zhōu’s secret headquarters hidden inside a volcano, he realizes at last that he cannot save Rhya. He calls for help from his former battle group, including his best friend, the wise and beautiful Allysen Olykden. Together, the warriors descend into the heart of the volcano, determined to save Rhya. Corr Syl the Terrible is the riveting tale of a young warrior’s journey to become something more than the swords on his back.

Author’s Note:  Corr Syl the Terrible completes the introduction to the Tsaeb civilization that began with the science fiction novel Corr Syl the Warrior. The story adds details to the nature of Tsaeb warriors, and it shows how changing your mind can transform weakness into strength. In this story, the change alters the future of the Earth itself.

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Now on Sale: “Corr Syl the Terrible” A #ScienceFiction Novella

Corr Syl the Terrible, My #SciFi Novella Is Available Now

Terrible Facebook-coverThis science fiction story for teens and adults follows Corr Syl’s struggle to rescue Rhya Bright who has been kidnapped by Ya Zhōu, a brilliant Human and ruthless dictator.  Corr Syl the Terrible is on sale at Amazon.com for $2.99.  Buy it on Amazon from any country.

Corr has discovered he hates killing and is brooding about his future as a farmer or librarian when he learns that someone has kidnapped his true love, Rhya Bright. Ya Zhōu, seeking to remove threats to his power, uses Rhya as bait to draw Corr into a trap. But when Corr captures his would-be assassins and Rhya overcomes a room full of guards and almost escapes, Zhōu realizes he is the one in danger and flees with Rhya, leaving false trails and traps in his wake. Dodging bombs, missiles, and jet fighters, Corr follows Rhya and Zhōu to a fortress inside a dead volcano where the final trap awaits.

This science-fiction novella takes place on an Earth where all animals are intelligent. Since they are older than the Human species, most animal species have evolved far beyond Human abilities. They have learned to heal their bodies, adapt their shape, and live in harmony with nature. They call themselves Tsaeb (silent T, long a).

Zhōu has Rhya taken away in a helicopter. Desperate to follow, Corr borrows an ancient warcraft from a museum. Z99, as the ship introduces itself, is sentient and constructed with technology based on the physics of dark matter and quantum relationships. The ship proves an invaluable asset as Corr’s journey takes him to Xi’ou, the capital of the Taoso nation. Though ostensibly ruled by the Emperor, the nation’s true power lies in the hands of Ya Zhōu, the Human Minister who commands a network of assassins and spies.

Though he began his mission alone, Corr meets unexpected allies like the young Cai family, who want to see Ya Zhōu deposed for the return of true peace and freedom. When Corr tracks Rhya to Zhōu’s secret headquarters hidden inside a volcano, he realizes at last that he cannot save Rhya. He calls for help from his former battle group, including his best friend, the wise and beautiful Allysen Olykden. Together, the warriors descend into the heart of the volcano, determined to save Rhya. Corr Syl the Terrible is the riveting tale of a young warrior’s journey to become something more than the swords on his back.

Author’s Note:  Corr Syl the Terrible completes the introduction to the Tsaeb civilization that began with the #ScienceFiction novel Corr Syl the Warrior. The story adds details to the nature of Tsaeb warriors, and it shows how changing your mind can transform weakness into strength. In this story, the change alters the future of the Earth itself.

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Corr Syl the Terrible (print: $12.95, eBook: $2.99).  Both formats are available online from Amazon.  The print edition is also available from Barnes & Noble, CreateSpace, and neighborhood bookstores.

Lactella: A Make-Believe Story of True Evil

Evil Lactella

Warning, “Lactella” is an evil character. This is not a nice story.

 

Ivan Johns’ Tragic Encounter

Adult_Female_Black_WidowIvanstor Johns, the new Mountainview City Manager, had one eccentricity. He cut his own hair in an uncommon style: short on the sides and long in the back. No one, not even his family, knew the secret it hid. Beneath the long hair, like a fat tick, a huge black widow spider clung to Johns’ neck. The spider’s claws and webs and the powerful chelicerae bracketing her mouth held her fast. Her hollow fangs reached deep into the City Manager’s flesh. In public, Johns appeared calm and relaxed. In private, the spider liked to make him beg and scream.

The strange pairing had been the result of a misfortunate accident. Intelligent spiders are rare among the Tsaeb, and those who exist tend to keep the shape and some of the instinctive behaviors of their progenitors. Black widow spider hatchlings still spin the tiny web strands that originally serve as sails and carry the spiderlings to new, and hopefully richer, habitats. Intelligent black widows snip those first webs and prevent the spiderlings from floating away. On rare occasions, they fail to snip in time, and the spiderlings are lost.

On a stormy summer day, a spider egg hatched unattended. Wind caught the baby spider’s web and carried her far from her family home. Such waifs rarely survive to become adults. The small spider survived because of luck, and because of her unusually high intelligence. Deposited in the heart of a large city, she grew while locked in a daily struggle to survive alone.

The spider’s quick mind kept her alive, but she did not learn the body and mind controls that a normal Tsaeb family life would have given her. She received none of the great store of Tsaeb experience and wisdom. Instead, she learned only how to avoid threats and satisfy hunger.

The spider found that other creatures broadcast sensory images. When she inserted her fangs into them, her inherited mental powers enabled her to sense the electromagnetic fluxes surrounding their muscles and nerves. She soon learned to replace or guide the impulses with her own, and she finally began to gain control over the muscles and senses of her victims. Her power became so complete that she could keep an animal conscious and calm while she fed. As her size and ability increased, she learned to use larger creatures for transport.

* * *

Susan

The first big step on the spider’s path to Ivan Johns was her discovery of a little girl named Susan. The accidental offspring of a drug addict and an alcoholic, Susan had lived an abnormal life. When her mother left Susan behind to become an entertainer for her dealer’s customers, Susan had only her father, a violent alcoholic. Often beaten and treated to other abuses, Susan’s body bore lesions that rarely healed before the next attack.

In her sixth year, Susan awoke one morning to an empty apartment. After a week, and after every dried scrap of discarded food had been consumed, Susan left the apartment for the first time. Walking unsteadily down the shadowy hall between silent doorways, she came to a stairwell and crept down to a dark alley.

Just a few steps down the alley Susan saw one of the unintelligent cats the Humans kept. The cat had its head in a sack, but when it sensed Susan and turned toward her, it appeared well fed and unafraid. Susan held out her hands and approached, and the cat sat and watched her for a moment, but then it trotted down the alley. Susan wanted to follow, but the sack held the remains of a dinner. She sat on a pile of newspapers and began digging through the sack.

The spider had been studying the cat from beneath a nearby garbage bin. When Susan came along, the spider’s ambition for a larger host soared. While Susan ate, the spider stunned the rat it was controlling and leapt up beside the little girl. Susan noticed the spider and started to rise, but the spider sprang onto Susan’s arm and injected her with venom. Then the spider moved out of sight beneath Susan’s dress and began taking control.

The spider found it difficult to control Susan, but after numerous partial failures that required more venom injections, the spider learned to direct the little girl’s movements. She resumed the nocturnal routine she had developed with the rats.

At first, the spider controlled Susan’s muscles, but not her thoughts. The many electrical flashes and fluxes in Susan’s brain varied more than those in the brains of rats and other small animals. There were waves and sparks with no connection to the child’s movements. During an encounter with another child, the spider realized that some of the sparks connected to sounds Susan made with her throat and mouth.

The spider tried to make Susan speak and had immediate success. The other child backed away, but the spider didn’t notice; she was learning to talk, and had Susan gobbling and snorting. The spider soon began connecting the sounds with feelings, actions, and senses. Her near-perfect memory and quick mind enabled her to build vocabulary and grasp structure almost overnight. Within a week, the spider could understand Susan’s thoughts and could direct the child to form sentences.

Susan had learned from her father that obedience produced the least pain, so she did not resist when she felt the urges the spider produced, and the shadowy presence wasn’t frightening at first.

Solitary by nature, the spider’s circumstances had given her no opportunity to learn to socialize with parents or friends. She tried to talk with Susan. Needing a name for the girl to use, the spider chose Lactella. The talks didn’t amount to much. Susan hadn’t ever had a real conversation, and she didn’t know how to play. Susan didn’t know how to describe the pain and fear she had endured, and when she did share something, the spider found it depressing.

Lactella tried to do things with Susan. Susan knew how to hop, skip, and run, but she hadn’t learned about hopscotch, skip rope, or any other games. Lactella became bored with the things Susan knew, but she found she could stimulate pulses along Susan’s nerves that made the child’s body jerk and twitch in odd ways.

Lactella found that she could darken Susan’s senses until the child became frightened, cried, and finally began screaming. This was exciting, but it attracted dangerous attention. Large people came sometimes, and though Lactella hid Susan well, she feared discovery above all else.

Lactella also learned about laughter. She witnessed it a few times in the homeless wanderers Susan encountered, but she didn’t understand how to produce it. The heavy barking breaths choked through Susan’s constricted throat were monstrous, the sounds of horrible madness.

Lactella kept the girl immobilized and hidden during the day, and let her creep through alleys in search of food at night. She let the child eat, but she did not consider its health.

When the pair came upon a male spider, Lactella followed ancient instincts, obtained sperm, and attacked the producer. Later she attached her pale yellow egg sack under Susan’s arm. As the eggs hatched, Lactella used her feeding solutions to soften the child’s flesh. She watched her offspring, curious to see how they would mature. Infection developed and spread under Susan’s skin. Lactella could see something was wrong, but she did not know what to do. None of her firstborn survived.

Soon Susan became weak and unsteady on her feet. When at last Lactella could not force the child to rise, she withdrew her fangs and claws and, ignoring the feeble sobs of the small ragged ball beside a waste bin, went hunting for a fresh human host.  She found a tear in a window screen at the back of the nearest house.  As she entered, she saw the sleeping form of Ivan Johns, and elation filled her.  Something great was about to begin.

Lactella

Warning, “Lactella” is an evil character.

Ivan Johns

Adult_Female_Black_WidowIvanstor Johns, the new Mountainview City Manager, had one eccentricity. He cut his own hair in an uncommon style: short on the sides and long in the back. No one, not even his family, knew the secret it hid. Beneath the long hair, like a fat tick, a huge black widow spider clung to Johns’ neck. The spider’s claws and webs and the powerful chelicerae bracketing her mouth held her fast. Her hollow fangs reached deep into the City Manager’s flesh. In public, Johns appeared calm and relaxed. In private, the spider liked to make him beg and scream.

The strange pairing had been the result of a misfortunate accident. Intelligent spiders are rare among the Tsaeb, and those who exist tend to keep the shape and some of the instinctive behaviors of their progenitors. Black widow spider hatchlings still spin the tiny web strands that originally serve as sails and carry the spiderlings to new, and hopefully richer, habitats. Intelligent black widows snip those first webs and prevent the spiderlings from floating away. On rare occasions, they fail to snip in time, and the spiderlings are lost.

On a stormy summer day, a spider egg hatched unattended. Wind caught the baby spider’s web and carried her far from her family home. Such waifs rarely survive to become adults. The small spider survived because of luck, and because of her unusually high intelligence. Deposited in the heart of a large city, she grew while locked in a daily struggle to survive alone.

The spider’s quick mind kept her alive, but she did not learn the body and mind controls that a normal Tsaeb family life would have given her. She received none of the great store of Tsaeb experience and wisdom. Instead, she learned only how to avoid threats and satisfy hunger.

The spider found that other creatures broadcast sensory images. When she inserted her fangs into them, her inherited mental powers enabled her to sense the electromagnetic fluxes surrounding their muscles and nerves. She soon learned to replace or guide the impulses with her own, and she finally began to gain control over the muscles and senses of her victims. Her power became so complete that she could keep an animal conscious and calm while she fed. As her size and ability increased, she learned to use larger creatures for transport.

* * *

Susan

The first big step on the spider’s path to Ivan Johns was her discovery of a little girl named Susan. The accidental offspring of a drug addict and an alcoholic, Susan had lived an abnormal life. When her mother left Susan behind to become an entertainer for her dealer’s customers, Susan had only her father, a violent alcoholic. Often beaten and treated to other abuses, Susan’s body bore lesions that rarely healed before the next attack.

In her sixth year, Susan awoke one morning to an empty apartment. After a week, and after every dried scrap of discarded food had been consumed, Susan left the apartment for the first time. Walking unsteadily down the shadowy hall between silent doorways, she came to a stairwell and crept down to a dark alley.

Just a few steps down the alley Susan saw one of the unintelligent cats the Humans kept. The cat had its head in a sack, but when it sensed Susan and turned toward her, it appeared well fed and unafraid. Susan held out her hands and approached, and the cat sat and watched her for a moment, but then it trotted down the alley. Susan wanted to follow, but the sack held the remains of a dinner. She sat on a pile of newspapers and began digging through the sack.

The spider had been studying the cat from beneath a nearby garbage bin. When Susan came along, the spider’s ambition for a larger host soared. While Susan ate, the spider stunned the rat it was controlling and leapt up beside the little girl. Susan noticed the spider and started to rise, but the spider sprang onto Susan’s arm and injected her with venom. Then the spider moved out of sight beneath Susan’s dress and began taking control.

The spider found it difficult to control Susan, but after numerous partial failures that required more venom injections, the spider learned to direct the little girl’s movements. She resumed the nocturnal routine she had developed with the rats.

At first, the spider controlled Susan’s muscles, but not her thoughts. The many electrical flashes and fluxes in Susan’s brain varied more than those in the brains of rats and other small animals. There were waves and sparks with no connection to the child’s movements. During an encounter with another child, the spider realized that some of the sparks connected to sounds Susan made with her throat and mouth.

The spider tried to make Susan speak and had immediate success. The other child backed away, but the spider didn’t notice; she was learning to talk, and had Susan gobbling and snorting. The spider soon began connecting the sounds with feelings, actions, and senses. Her near-perfect memory and quick mind enabled her to build vocabulary and grasp structure almost overnight. Within a week, the spider could understand Susan’s thoughts and could direct the child to form sentences.

Susan had learned from her father that obedience produced the least pain, so she did not resist when she felt the urges the spider produced, and the shadowy presence wasn’t frightening at first.

Solitary by nature, the spider’s circumstances had given her no opportunity to learn to socialize with parents or friends. She tried to talk with Susan. Needing a name for the girl to use, the spider chose Lactella. The talks didn’t amount to much. Susan hadn’t ever had a real conversation, and she didn’t know how to play. Susan didn’t know how to describe the pain and fear she had endured, and when she did share something, the spider found it depressing.

Lactella tried to do things with Susan. Susan knew how to hop, skip, and run, but she hadn’t learned about hopscotch, skip rope, or any other games. Lactella became bored with the things Susan knew, but she found she could stimulate pulses along Susan’s nerves that made the child’s body jerk and twitch in odd ways.

Lactella found that she could darken Susan’s senses until the child became frightened, cried, and finally began screaming. This was exciting, but it attracted dangerous attention. Large people came sometimes, and though Lactella hid Susan well, she feared discovery above all else.

Lactella also learned about laughter. She witnessed it a few times in the homeless wanderers Susan encountered, but she didn’t understand how to produce it. The heavy barking breaths choked through Susan’s constricted throat were monstrous, the sounds of horrible madness.

Lactella kept the girl immobilized and hidden during the day, and let her creep through alleys in search of food at night. She let the child eat, but she did not consider its health.

When the pair came upon a male spider, Lactella followed ancient instincts, obtained sperm, and attacked the producer. Later she attached her pale yellow egg sack under Susan’s arm. As the eggs hatched, Lactella used her feeding solutions to soften the child’s flesh. She watched her offspring, curious to see how they would mature. Infection developed and spread under Susan’s skin. Lactella could see something was wrong, but she did not know what to do. None of her firstborn survived.

Soon Susan became weak and unsteady on her feet. When at last Lactella could not force the child to rise, she withdrew her fangs and claws and, ignoring the feeble sobs of the small ragged ball beside a waste bin, went hunting for a fresh human host.  She found a tear in a window screen at the back of the nearest house.  As she entered, she saw the sleeping form of Ivan Johns, and elation filled her.  Something great was about to begin.

Story: Corr and Allon in Nursery Canyon

Corr and Allon in Nursery Canyon

The Big-eared Rabbit with a Large Tail[This is the first of a series of stories from the World of the Tsaeb that I created for young readers.]

Corr Syl’s parents had brought a picture to their new residence in Nursery Canyon. His father had explained, “Long ago Corr, when creatures first learned body control, warrior rabbits grew long tails. They carried two swords, just as warriors do today. This rabbit could be one of your ancestors, Corr—a very famous one.” Continue reading

Intelligence and Rise of the Tsaeb Civilization

What is Intelligence and How is it Used in Fiction?

NASA Header ImageFamiliar components of intelligence are reaction time, sensitivity, problem solving, foresight, and memory.  Novelists often elevate one or more of the components to make their characters more interesting or to give them the necessary ability to achieve plot elements.  Sometimes we pick up hints that a character is intelligent and then we are delighted when she almost magically connects disparate clues and solves the crime.  Dr. Who and Sherlock Holmes are spectacularly successful at this.  In other instances we enjoy watching a character’s routine use of his powerful intellect.  It is fun to watch Lee Child’s Jack Reacher use his exceptionally acute hearing to follow the progress of a professional tail who thinks Reacher is totally unaware of his presence.

Characters are also defined by their temperament, they way they experience and express anger, love, jealousy, regret, and so forth.  Temperament might seem to be the only real concern for character building, because it so clearly distinguishes individuals.  Intelligence, however, sets limits on the expression of temperament.  A smart wise-ass is more likely to produce interesting insults than a dumb one.  And an intelligent character is more likely to notice a detail such as the shape of a tree and see the connection between shape, competitive ability, and history of the tree.  Intelligence determines the depth and richness of a character’s response to experience.

What produces intelligence?  We know that brain size, composition, and internal connectivity are involved, but we only know that these are correlated with measured intelligence (see the references).  We do not know how they work, and we do not know the full list of factors that are necessary.  Perhaps high intelligence requires the presence of structures such as complex hands, thumbs, and voice box, or perhaps an undiscovered chemical.  Whatever the requirements, why haven’t they been met in many complex organisms?  Why aren’t all animals intelligent?

The theme and plot for “Corr Syl the Warrior” required highly intelligent characters with powers of thought beyond human ability.  I used evolution to create them.  I imagined an Earth on which evolution, in its gloriously random way, included intelligence among the traits of the first higher organisms.  I imagined that intelligence was common to all animals, and that along with other character traits, natural selection would continue to improve intelligence.  By the time dinosaurs appeared, most animals were as intelligent as humans are now (see the references).

Before I could use intelligence in my story, I had to answer numerous questions.  A central question concerned competition and conflict.  Would the many intelligent species on Earth have lived and worked together peacefully?  Or would they have built weapons and fought wars?  Observing the warlike tendencies of our modern human civilization, we might expect that universal intelligence would have raged across the Earth like a firestorm leaving nothing behind, perhaps not even the planet itself.  So this is what I decided must happen:  :-) Continue reading

Reviews of Corr Syl the Warrior

Reviews of Corr Syl the Warrior

Corr Syl the WarriorRecent reviews:

  • “A beautifully written YA novel that will captivate environmentalists and sci-fi fans of all ages.”  Kirkus reviews (starred review). 
  • “It is an outstanding book. It’s one of those books you get excited over; that have you turning to the next page and reading more, even if it’s two in the morning.” Amazon Review by MaryAnn.
  • “Unique and highly original.  It drew me in and was difficult to put down.”  Goodreads review by BozBozo. 
  • “I found it refreshing, extremely unique with funny, laugh-out-loud moments, too.  It’s targeted at YA, but anybody who enjoys hard fantasy will like this book.”  Louise Wise at http://louisewise.com. 
  • “This is undeniably a commendable story, one that sci-fi and fantasy fans will definitely love and talk about for a very long time.”  -Barnes and Noble Readers’ Favorite review at by Lit Amri.
  • “There is really nothing more you can ask of a story than is found here in Corr Syl the Warrior. The pace is brisk and keeps you engaged, the characters are so believable that Lactella gives me the creeps long after I’ve finished, and I’ll be glad to find what Corr and Rhya are up against in the promised sequel. ”  Amazon review by Paula H. 
  • “Three Words: Action, adventure, thrilling.  Age Recommendation: Whenever, it’s perfect for those looking for a thrill, no matter if your 9 or 99.”  Bianca Blossom, Cherrybooksomtree.wordpress.com.
  • “…a most unusual and interestingly told tale that elicits empathy for the characters as well as the conditions it describes.”  Amazon review by John H. Manhold.
  • “The truly hardcore, sci-fi fan will be delighted and entertained by the pace and deep thought involved in this novel. A must for the serious sci-fi reader.” –Barnes and Noble Readers’ Favorite review by Bill Howard.
  • “Part two was where the book really captured my interest with a very interesting and creative choice of villain.  I was hooked at this point and the story started to fall into place for me.  I started to notice a hint of humour in places and I found myself not wanting to put the book down.”  Amazon review by Chettsgeni.
  • “It has cool action scenes and a few interesting side plots to go along with it.  I really like how the writer makes an effort to explain the science and the way the Tsaeb work as a society in a way that makes logical sense.  I really enjoyed this book.” Claireamber.blogspot.com. 
  • “Engaging and entertaining, it has all the literary ingredients of a successful novel. Indeed, this is more than just a story about a young warrior’s adventure but is also a reminder of how humans are abusing the environment.  This is a concern that has been expressed in very many ways but this one is certainly one of the most imaginative. -Barnes and Noble Readers’ Favorite by Marie Beltran.
  • “For a first novel, I have to say this book is as well written as any I’ve read, and I read a lot.  I liked it.”  Unpublished Review sent to author by Truman Burgess.
  • “An original story, great concept, I want more!  Rogers has developed an alternative Earth, where we are the invasive species!  An original approach to force the reader to evaluate how interconnected we are with everything alive on this planet.  Excellent presentation of the politics of conflict and a thorough understanding how even amongst like species there can be political agendas.  The book should be titled ‘Corr Syl the Negotiator and Strategist, Scientist, and Warrior’.  I read it in one sitting – I like that, when a book grabs hold of me, makes me see things from another perspective, makes me think – and then makes me want more when I put it down.”  Amazon review by Kristine Uhlman.

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About #CorrSyl

A beautifully written YA novel that will captivate environmentalists and sci-fi fans of all ages.  Kirkus Reviews (starred review).

On an Earth on which intelligence evolved long before humans appeared, tensions are rising between humans and the ancient multi-species Tsaeb civilization.  When an armed human patrol crosses the border into a small neighboring Tsaeb district, the district council asks a young Tsaeb warrior named Corr Syl to investigate and prepare a response.  Corr learns that spies have infiltrated his district, and he realizes that many lives are at risk.  He catches a glimpse of something truly evil, and with no time to spare, works out a response that will end the immediate dangers, but that might start a war.

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